Freedom: no vamos a ir sin una pelea : Trifextra #75 #

Trifextra #75 join in

This weeks Trifextra  goes a little something like…

Last weekend we gave you a super prescriptive prompt.  We also promised you we’d ease up this week.  As such, this weekend we are asking for a thirty-three word free-write.  Any topic, any style–just give us your best thirty three.

Here’s my addition sparked by Independence day, friendship and loyalty.


Heavy hearts pulled

by the broken dreams of worldly cruelty

walking out

minds focused

eyes clear

hands on shoulders

taking life on the chin

bound by loyalty

they would only go down



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(Photo credit: fighter.arts)


19 responses to “Freedom: no vamos a ir sin una pelea : Trifextra #75 #

  1. Going down swinging is the only way to go down…and I love the line about taking life on the chin.

    this was moving, I felt a ROCKY moment at the end, like I wanted to raise my arms for their victories.

  2. “Taking life on the chin” – what a line. And for some reason this made me think of what’s going on in Egypt now (this probably wasn’t what you meant, but still). Nice little story of resiliency.

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