ABRE LOS OJOS : MYOPIC-DAZZLE-BASIN : TRIFEXTRA#97


This weekend Trifecta’s Trifextra has us dazzled with a myopic view with what lays in the basin:)

Join In! Click ^ up there! Squint your eyes and give us 33 words:)

Hers’s what they have to say on the prompt:

“This weekend we’re asking you to add thirty of your own words to the following three words for a total of thirty-three. Good luck!

myopic
dazzle  
basin”
abre
Here’s my bit:                “Abre Los Ojos”
——————————————————————————————
Holding her ..
Speaking Spanish tongue.
“Abre Los Ojos”
Jerking, preferring her myopic view..
Control lost
To eye’s that dazzle
Warm light mirrored reflection.
He took her
A basin of warm water..
..Loves Baptism.
.
bath

14 responses to “ABRE LOS OJOS : MYOPIC-DAZZLE-BASIN : TRIFEXTRA#97

  1. Quite liking the basin of warm water……somehow, very sensual, certainly a great sensory image for my mind. Lovely, lyrical work. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent via this great piece! 🙂

  2. You’ve got some lovely imagery here, the “basin of warm water” in particular. I think you may have misplaced a couple of apostrophes – if I’m reading it correctly, “eyes” shouldn’t be possessive, but “Love’s” should be. Nice poem!

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